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Blaec
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 130
The Sunshine State

0 posted 2001-07-05 02:58 AM



You say that you love her.

So why are you here with me?

What keeps you coming back?

Is it my insanity?

What is it that turns you on?

Is it the wild side of me?

How much can you take?

I've just got to see.

How long can you keep up?

Will you run away?

Are you strong enough to leave?

Or too weak not to stay?


Kris

© Copyright 2001 Kristi Henderson - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-05 03:07 AM


Last two lines convicted me!
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-07-05 03:42 AM


That was awsome! 'strong enough to leave, or too week to stay'!  wow, that is so true of alot of us!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-07-05 04:09 AM


Interesting...James
Blaec
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 130
The Sunshine State
4 posted 2001-07-05 11:57 AM


Thanks for the replies!
Glad that you enjoyed!

Kris

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