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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-07-04 09:40 PM


I used to respect you,
But I didn't know you then,
I thought you were my friend,
But it didn't work out in the end,

You know you hurt me,
When you left that day,
You didn't turn back,
You just kept on walking,

Now I've nothing to say to you,
I was there when you needed someone,
And as soon as I needed the same,
You were never there when I needed,

Now friendships a two-way street,
Now its time I turned my back,
Now its time I walked away.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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SmittenKitten
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1 posted 2001-07-04 10:25 PM


  *hugs*  betrayal is an awful awful feeling.  Here's my shoulder, feel free to use it.
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Blaec
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2 posted 2001-07-04 10:35 PM


When a friend betrays you that's the ultimate pain.  My best friend for 20 years did this to me over and over again.  It took me a long time to turn my back on her.  It still hurts 4 years later.  
I enjoyed reading this.  Hope it gets better.

Kris

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3 posted 2001-07-05 07:52 PM


Krista - Awwww thank u

Kris - Yeah I also have had the same thing maybe not for 20 years, but u can't just walk away from them on the first mistakes I guess and I think you must be a very good friend to do so.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2001-07-06 11:31 PM


If you want friends, you must show yourself friendly.  I am sure with your devotion as a friend that you will find and make many more friends.  Sorry that your friend was not there when you needed them.  I hope that they will come to realize how valuable a true friend truly is.
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