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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-07-04 09:18 PM


A lone seagull flies towards the horizon
Guided by the setting sun
Such serenity there is by the ocean
As the day is nearly over and done

This beautiful day has all but ended
Soon the water will change from gold to blue
As the sun will be replaced
And the moon will come into full view

The last light of the day we will savour
A glow of gold outlines your face
Soon our footprints in the sand
Will be gone without leaving a trace

But another day awaits us tomorrow
In your arms is where I now belong
As the sun sinks below the horizon
And all traces of the day are now gone

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-04 09:22 PM


what a beautiful day and lovely moments, a good read.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-07-09 01:52 PM


Such a lovely poem needs another go.

Titia

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WhiteDragon
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3 posted 2001-07-09 03:36 PM


A very lovely poem, indeed...  Ahh, walks on the beach with a loved one.  Haven't done that yet    God BLess, Jeremy
Suetang
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4 posted 2001-07-09 06:24 PM


Thank you all for reading this and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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