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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-07-04 08:32 PM



Can you whisper softly to me?
I've lost my mind
Who is to blame?
My migraine
Listening for words
When the storm hits
The many of me
Sorry I have to go

Where I go
In my next life
Nutty as a fruitcake
You know me more than anyone
I promise
When you're not there
Keeper of the stones
Never forget who loved you best

Am I a Poet?
Sometimes I want
The mind's eye
No words
Where I go
In my next life
Make me a memory
I rest my head

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

© Copyright 2001 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-07-04 08:41 PM


Titia~
Delightfully done !
I found me.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-07-04 09:45 PM


Titia,
Enjoyed and I rest my case.

JLR
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3 posted 2001-07-05 12:59 PM


The patience it must have taken to do this...amazes me.  Very cool!
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-07-05 02:10 AM


Marge, I can do this forever, it's so much fun

Seymour, thanks

JLR, it doesn't take that much time

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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5 posted 2001-07-05 08:45 AM


being a little slow on the uptake..I couldn't for the life of me figure out what this was....then I finally figured it out... too clever... enjoyed this!!


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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-07-05 08:57 AM


Brava, Titia   Well done indeed!
Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2001-07-05 11:18 AM


Thanks to you all.

Try one yourself you'll enjoy doing it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

VAS
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8 posted 2001-07-05 01:41 PM


am I to understand, Titia, that is a string of clichés woven together to tell a tale?
Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-07-05 05:06 PM


Hello VAS, this 'poem' is made out of the titles of poems submitted on Passions.

Few months ago someone started and once in a while I make one, it's nice to do, nothing serious though, just fun.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

SmittenKitten
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10 posted 2001-07-06 01:48 AM


  hehe, Titia this is awesome!  And I have no idea why it made me smile so much that my poem title is in there    ah well...the small delights in life eh?  

Very cool idea!  
~Krista

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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11 posted 2001-07-06 02:55 AM


Oh Titia, you are so clever, and now that took a lot of time to work all those in there, so I thank you from the bottom of my heart for working me into your story, and I kept it and feel truly honored to have shared as part of your work.  Thank you and a great job!

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

ethome
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12 posted 2001-07-06 04:28 AM


And you've done a great job compiling these!   I loved the whole idea....well done!!
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13 posted 2001-07-06 05:55 AM


Yah ...........I Can whisper softly ....LOL    ..... Titia
jwesley
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14 posted 2001-07-06 08:26 AM


Compliled wonderfully Titia..gonna have to try this...

jwesley

Titia Geertman
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15 posted 2001-07-06 04:35 PM


Thanks very much all of you.
Glad you liked them

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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