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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I am a shadow Thumped from the inner void Shaken free As crystallizations of thought A reveled shadow The quintessential Labeler Of everything that I am not Please quell my urges To stand in front of you And break free I was cast a lot, this life Shadowed and binding I am the underworld You're finite I feed 'pon your empty strife When you’re feeling down Just cast your eyes on me I want you To feel the pain of love Shadows memories They are the same to me Please tell me What you are dreaming of I am the shadow? You dripped a thought on me I could die That you still remain How is it so fair Passion is a failing You should fall As I, in the rain Shadows dance at noon Souls are mostly feeding Could you tell I want to taste I’m not a shadow I am only you Fallen down Ignored as waste Shadow Shadow I am tired The anti-you I aspired! Shadow Shadow I can’t die until you do Shadow Shadow On that day I will be you! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayoutwalt, This is really wayout, it's a good thing you left a shadow to pull it back. Enjoyed |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this one it was different Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ I am the shadow? You dripped a thought on me' 'I’m not a shadow I am only you Fallen down' I greatly enjoyed where your thoughts took me in this~ Pretty pondamerous ! Uh-Huh ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Shadows dance at noon Souls are mostly feeding Could you tell I want to taste this was shivery good....I like it alot |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- this is way cool!  i like it much!! ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! Tastefully done Walt!! "When you’re feeling down Just cast your eyes on me I want you To feel the pain of love" Classy stuff!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I am the shadow? You dripped a thought on me Oh Walty, wonderful poem, excellent lines! Well Done Maree "little miss understood |
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