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vandana
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0 posted 2001-07-04 11:24 AM



There Is a place
In a heart,
To give love away,
To live forever,
A place for loving,
A place for everyone to love,
A place to give,
A place for loving,
A place to give a heart away,
There Is a little place,
In your heart,
There Is  a love to live,
There a place for a heart to give,
place to give,
Place to give,
heart away,
a plac to stay alive,
P place for living,
A place for a smile,
A place to see,
A place ,
when you find a place to rest,
A place for a best time,
to come,
There Is a place
to follow your heart,
A place to say,
A place to give,
A place to forget,
A place to remember,
A place to love,
A place for loving,
A place for caring,
A place In your heart,

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 2001-07-04 11:29 AM


beautifully written Vandana, one of your best.  I like your poem a lot.
Sven
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2 posted 2001-07-04 04:30 PM


and I know that you know that place very well my friend. . .

indeed, one of your best. . .  

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1slick_lady
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3 posted 2001-07-04 06:39 PM


yes...there is a place...helen
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-07-05 11:33 PM


This is nice vandana....James
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