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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-07-04 10:31 AM


Better Meant

my better half awaits for me
searching winds, across blue seas
seeking high, in quest is thee
my better half awaits for me

lone, some part of thee is found
across the winds which touch this ground
to my side thee shall be bound
my better half awaits for me

in search to enhance all thee boasts
travels on from coast to coast
feels inside the tune, needs my key
my better half awaits for me

a cameo is all thee bears
and a lock of silken hair
as better meant, true love for thee
my better half awaits for me

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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-07-04 10:34 AM


I do believe if your better half waits for you, your best half is here with us. Thank you for writing such wisdom
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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2 posted 2001-07-04 12:29 PM


Well I wanna tell you I would give anything, anything to sail the sea with someone and never, ever look back, and this is what I wanted to take from this poem - so I did    What a fantastic sight my mind's eye took me on with this poem, thank you.

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

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3 posted 2001-07-04 12:45 PM


Lovely lovely lovely

Titia

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4 posted 2001-07-05 09:43 AM


my better half waits
and I shall fly to thy side
together with thee

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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5 posted 2001-07-05 10:02 AM


interesting form and read.... I enjoyed
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6 posted 2001-07-05 10:31 AM


LadyInWhite~

'a cameo is all thee bears
and a lock of silken hair'


What an intriguing line~
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-07-05 01:43 PM


Very lovely!

Deb

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