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JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-07-04 02:34 AM

Unintentional Crime

This is it, I’m sure
I’ve done it this time
though not my intention
to commit such a crime

if it were your decision
to determine my fate
I’d be sitting in a jail cell
the rest of life I’d wait

by you, I’ve done my best
though you would disagree
I hope you never hold yourself
to the standards you’ve held me

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2001-07-04 02:47 AM

hmmmmmmm mysterious but i like it... leaves one to wonder

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-07-04 02:59 AM

passing JLR a "get out of jail free card"

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-04 03:51 AM

JLR~
Ponderous thoughts with a well-wisdomed message.

LOL @ OneSlickLady !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

4 posted 2001-07-04 06:38 AM

Excellent job...well said

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-04 09:51 AM

Ouch, that stings. Let it all out, JLR. You'll be better for it.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-07-04 10:44 AM

JLR,
Good thoughts, good words, good write.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-07-04 11:12 AM

If you can't forgive others, you cannot forgive yourself. Well written feelings here, thanks JLR.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

8 posted 2001-07-04 11:29 AM

Well aimed shot!

(hope you got slick's card!)

Blaec
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

9 posted 2001-07-04 12:38 PM

You touched home on this one.
Great write!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

10 posted 2001-07-04 01:12 PM

Your responses gave me a smile this morning that I lacked last night as I wrote. Thank you all for that. And yes, Slick sent the card fedex...so I am once again walking among you. LOL!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

11 posted 2001-07-04 06:06 PM

good...glad you got it...thank God for fedex...didnt want you tied up on the holiday...i'm glad you're better...helen

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