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Heavenly Shades Of Twilight
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Heavenly Shades Of Twilight |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Heavenly Shades Of Twilight ~*Marge Tindal*~  Just before the set of sun gives up the day's last sigh Silent palette of crimsoned magenta kisses a twilight sky Brushing soft the colors on landscaped shores of majesty Purges utterance of an Ahhhhh ! from the sigh of me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
This is beautiful....... I'm not to good with colors though, is "crimsoned magenta" the same as plum.... looks like plum to me, but hey you've got a wonderful way with your words.... Yes, I defintitely like your description better. Good descriptive writing. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And you get a very big Ahhhh from me for both the pic and the words that merge so well into the whole scheme..very well done, Marge..gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am in "ahhh" too...full moon tonight up here. He he, we went through this before and it is there too right? Well, we got the magenta thing happening in the sky here tonight too, and you described it too perfection, but do you ever do anything else? Nope! Beeutful! If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LighthouseBob~ Plumb-gorgeous will do nicely !  Thanks, Bob~ Logan~ I would know that you'd have an eye for the beauty of the twilight. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ LOL @ you ! You moon - me moon Between us two-moon Me see - You see Same moon - shiney ! Have a happy, sugar lady~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMMMM yes perfect...as soon as I saw the title I was hearing the music...twilight time oh yes |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh my goodness Marge sweetie this is gorgeous I luved every word and the image  ahhhhh ThankU dearPoetFriend for this superb read tonite *~coco~* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- ahhhh yes...mooned again... ...and there is none better at it than you.. i'm so glad this was the first post i've opened this evening... what a beautiful way to begin the night this is one of my favorite songs too love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I just love knowing you enjoy the music as much as I do. CocoBaci~ Why I'm so tickled to see you - I'd write three more to get ya' to stay ! Vicky~ Well ... gotcha' covered, huh ? Luna - toons AND raspberry hot chocolate ! *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, here's a big ole awwwwww from me Very lovely, Marge! The Platters midi enhanced it perfectly~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Gotcha ! That tune just grabs me too ! Glad to know you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Just on accounta' I need a soft song to lose myself in~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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