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Heavenly Shades Of Twilight

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Marge Tindal
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Heavenly Shades Of Twilight
~*Marge Tindal*~

Just before the set of sun
gives up the day's last sigh
Silent palette of crimsoned magenta
kisses a twilight sky
Brushing soft the colors
on landscaped shores of majesty
Purges utterance of an Ahhhhh !
from the sigh of me



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-04-2001 01:36 AM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

This is beautiful.......

I'm not to good with colors though, is "crimsoned magenta" the same as plum.... looks like plum to me, but hey you've got a  wonderful way with your words.... Yes,
I defintitely like your description better.  Good descriptive writing.
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And you get a very big Ahhhh from me for both the pic and the words that merge so well into the whole scheme..very well done, Marge..gentle smile
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3 posted 07-04-2001 01:48 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I am in "ahhh" too...full moon tonight up here.  He he, we went through this before and it is there too right?  Well, we got the magenta thing happening in the sky here tonight too, and you described it too perfection, but do you ever do anything else?  Nope!  Beeutful!

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
 ~* Mysteria *~

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LighthouseBob~
Plumb-gorgeous will do nicely !
Thanks, Bob~

Logan~
I would know that you'd have an eye for the beauty of the twilight.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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Mysteria~
LOL @ you !

You moon - me moon
Between us two-moon
Me see - You see
Same moon - shiney !

Have a happy, sugar lady~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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MMMMMMMM  yes perfect...as soon as I saw the title I was hearing the music...twilight time oh yes
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Oh my goodness Marge sweetie this is gorgeous I luved every word and the image  ahhhhh

ThankU dearPoetFriend for this superb read tonite
*~coco~*
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Marge-
   ahhhh yes...mooned again...  
   ...and there is none better
   at it than you..  
   i'm so glad this was the first
   post i've opened this evening...
   what a beautiful way to begin the night  
   this is one of my favorite songs too  

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-04-2001).]

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Paula~
I just love knowing you enjoy the music as much as I do.

CocoBaci~
Why I'm so tickled to see you -
I'd write three more to get ya' to stay !

Vicky~
Well ... gotcha' covered, huh ?
Luna - toons AND raspberry hot chocolate !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Well, here's a big ole awwwwww from me  
Very lovely, Marge!  The Platters midi enhanced it perfectly~

Take care,
Melissa~
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Melissa~
Gotcha !
That tune just grabs me too !
Glad to know you enjoyed it.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Just on accounta' I need a soft song to lose myself in~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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