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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If I could but touch The smile there upon your lips I'd need nothing more |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Simple yet expresses the essences of your feelings. I like this. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Smiling Senryu Sent expressing back to you Appreciation ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Paula, how simply, yet so profoundly..very well done..gentle smile |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Paula sweetie, this is awesome I so much enjoyed reading this... Just lovely PoetFriend so keep writing em and I'll keep reading em... SmilesNhugs2Ualways *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of how beautiful a certain woman looks when she smiles...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, simply stunning Senyru. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful beauty!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Short and very sweet! Well done!  All writing comes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're just going to touch it? I thought you were going to do something else.....just kidding Paula....I love the implications of this piece!! Well done!! |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
that was a phrace or ur heart talking .....short but sweet .......there is more meanings into a poem than what u see in letters |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...thanks sweet lady Logan...I appreciate your kind words Coco...oh how good to see you again lil one...thank you James...I'm glad I could remind you Kethry...thank you Temptress...thankyou too Lone Wolf...thanks a lot ethome...LOL you would sweet poet man... juan...thank you |
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