Open Poetry #14 |
Lava Lamp Libido |
SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
~ Lava Lamp Libido ~ Like tongues in a passionate kiss, the two blobs meet - rubbing and sliding. The light goes out and the dance begins. Up and down, up and down. The heat surrounds them, and is them - forever until the energy is gone. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A way cool comparison, a very clever use of a theme! By the way - I love the title Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-03-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Fantastic metaphorical use. My lava light is on ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing how the lava lamp has returned...didn't like it then...but now... with this, I must regroup....only you said it was turned off...before the kiss...so I am confused.... but that is not hard to do to me, now and then.... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Melissa ~ thank you oodles full! Marge ~ ohh no, what have I done? Hehe, you go girl Sunshine ~ hehe, I am sorry for the confusion...I didn't even realise there was a distinction to be made Actually I meant the light being turned off was the main light...you have to have all the rest of the lights off for the lava lamp to do its magic "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I have always wanted a lava lamp and now I want one even more lol. Really enjoyed this poem. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Brian ~ well they are lovely to watch |
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