navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Lava Lamp Libido
Open Poetry #14
Post A Reply Post New Topic Lava Lamp Libido Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-07-03 11:09 PM


~ Lava Lamp Libido ~

Like tongues in a
passionate kiss,
the two blobs meet -
rubbing and sliding.
The light goes out
and the dance begins.
Up and down, up and down.
The heat surrounds them,
and is them - forever
until the energy
is gone.




© Copyright 2001 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2001-07-03 11:15 PM



A way cool comparison, a very clever use of a theme!
By the way - I love the title  

Take care,
Melissa~


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-03-2001).]

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2001-07-03 11:16 PM


SmittenKitten~
Fantastic metaphorical use.
My lava light is on ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-07-03 11:19 PM


Amazing how the lava lamp has returned...didn't like it then...but now... with this, I must regroup....only you said it was turned off...before the kiss...so I am confused....

but that is not hard to do to me, now and then....

SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
4 posted 2001-07-03 11:29 PM


Melissa ~    thank you oodles full!

Marge ~ ohh no, what have I done?  Hehe, you go girl  

Sunshine ~ hehe, I am sorry for the confusion...I didn't even realise there was a distinction to be made    Actually I meant the light being turned off was the main light...you have to have all the rest of the lights off for the lava lamp to do its magic  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2001-07-04 04:38 PM


I have always wanted a lava lamp and now I want one even more lol. Really enjoyed this poem.

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
6 posted 2001-07-04 09:50 PM


Brian ~ well they are lovely to watch    
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Lava Lamp Libido

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary