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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-07-03 11:08 PM


"questions to my love"

do you know how beautiful you are
or how incredible it feels to have your love
do u realise that i cherish you so
that i thank my lucky stars above

do u realise that you are so amazing
that there is so much of you i adore
since you walked into my life
you've opened love's door

do you understand how much i need you
the trivial things matter not
the sweetest things in life
are things that can't be bought

come to me darling
let's make this a reality once and for all
i won't promise you that everything will be perfect
but i can promise you, i'll catch you should you fall

i've never loved like this before
our kisses linger in the air
yes come to me darling
that's if you dare

but if it's still too much too soon
this i shall understand
just realise you hold my heart
in the palm of your hand

we're scared together
i can feel it in the words you don't say
as i quietly
brush my own tears away

just knowing i have your love
brings me comfort and peace of mind
in the depths of you
me, i did find

AMK
July 3rd 2001

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
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where the sky and horizon meet
1 posted 2001-07-03 11:12 PM


Oh my...this is beautiful.  You have no idea how you've touched me.
~Krista

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-07-03 11:13 PM



A lovely testament of devotion here, Amy~  You write of discovering love and it's vast emotions/situations well  

Take care,
Melissa~

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas
3 posted 2001-07-04 02:07 AM


Ahh, Amy/Aim, very gentle smile, I hope you realize just how much I wish you all the happiness in the world. I hope this all goes the way you wish it
Lisann
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4 posted 2001-07-04 02:11 AM


This was beautiful Amy.
CocoBaci
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5 posted 2001-07-04 02:19 AM


Amy, what a sigh you got from me upon reading this beauty of poetry tonite...

Thanx hun & I'm smiling with ya always
Hugs2U
*~coco~*


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6 posted 2001-07-04 04:53 PM


and those are the answers. . .

well done Amy. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2001-07-05 08:43 AM


thank you all for your heartfelt
replies. as always means everything to
me. hope you all are well. take care.

amy  

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
8 posted 2001-07-05 09:36 AM


wonderfully written, amy! i loved it!!  
i hope it's all you've imagined and hoped for.... lovely writing full of longing, yearning, and honesty!

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