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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-03 09:45 PM


Rose quartz from the artists' studio
echoing of beauty long ago
Ocean calls, a whisper on the wind
fairy dust shall lead the way again.

Symbols drawn with love upon the sand
circle within, heartfelt wishes planned
Rose hued shadows of the setting sun
seedlings now of life newly begun.

Not to be ignored, the spirit rules
passion held in check releases jewels
holding forth till magic may win out
past and present future turn about.

Sit within this circle born of dreams
cast your stone within the fires' scheme
magic waits when eyes are open wide
truth, the only answer, shall abide


© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2001-07-03 09:48 PM


ohhh,I like this VERY much! So pretty  
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2 posted 2001-07-03 09:48 PM


YES!
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3 posted 2001-07-03 09:50 PM


Cat...this is wonderful....and a lovely light of hope!....
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4 posted 2001-07-03 11:28 PM


'Not to be ignored, the spirit rules
passion held in check releases jewels
holding forth till magic may win out
past and present future turn about.'

Absolutely beautiful, Sandra...you've penned some great lines here...wonderful rhyme and flow...I love it!

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it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

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5 posted 2001-07-04 12:55 PM


I related to this on a level deeper that I can tell you.  Thanks.
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6 posted 2001-07-04 01:06 AM


yep you are magic girl
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7 posted 2001-07-04 11:52 AM


Sandra,
     Enchanting, and full of hope for all that magic to become a reality. A beautiful imagery to all of us who dream...
             Love, Elise

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8 posted 2001-07-04 04:29 PM


just wonderful Sandra. . . flowing wonderfully with the thoughts and images of wonder and love. . .

well done. . .  

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9 posted 2001-07-05 05:16 PM


oh, lil' sis......you really are magik, as you have penned a gift of love and put it here for us to touch!!  These really are the things that magik stuff is made of, but the finest ingredient is the spirit of the soul, and of that you have an abundance!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


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10 posted 2001-07-05 07:25 PM


Hey Sandra:  I enjoyed not only the colorful imagery here but also the fact that this is a fresh departure from the other poems of yours I have read, in terms of positive future possibilities and hope -- a sense that the strong and constant introspection and contemplation is now expanding to the universe outside...  like a beautiful flower beginning to bloom.  Congradulations -- you're going to find a lot of sunshine to warm you up again.

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11 posted 2001-07-05 07:44 PM


Lovely work hon...I really enjoyed it...

K

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on unlikely land with every step.


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12 posted 2002-02-04 06:10 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such magic shines in your words always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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