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Fireworks in F Sharp

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Poet deVine
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I walked right up to your door
reached out and rang the bell
after what you did, Iím ready
to consign your soul to hell

I saw the look on your face!!!
and then your face turned gray
it fell, it rose, you opened your mouth
it turned red and stayed that way!

She walked up behind you
smiled when she saw me
you sputtered, turned, I just smiled
here was the door, I was the key

You sat down and so did we
your wife and your little fling
I was so happy inside
it was all I could do not to sing!

We told you that we knew about
the betrayal and the lies
we never shed a tear for you
an enlightened woman never cries

We almost laughed when you saw
we knew about the other two
in fact we tried to tell them
but they still believed in you

She told you to get out right then
don't take anything but your clothes
you cried, you pleaded, you pouted
as you wiped your runny nose

Silence on this side of the door
as you slowly walked away
we smiled in newfound friendship
today, we made you pay.

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1 posted 07-03-2001 08:43 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

O-M-G!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! You rock dear PoetdeVine!Wow! I Love this!  
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2 posted 07-03-2001 09:06 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Revenge is sweet, sometimes.  One day you must forgive him and yourself  
I gotta say, though, you DO ROCK!
SmittenKitten
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3 posted 07-03-2001 09:19 PM       View Profile for SmittenKitten   Email SmittenKitten   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmittenKitten's Home Page   View IP for SmittenKitten

I agree    and you do rock!  You go girl!!!
Hugs,
~Krista
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4 posted 07-04-2001 01:25 AM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Now that is how to take the bull by the.... (horns) or whatever and make him pay.
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5 posted 07-04-2001 02:22 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Oh my this was great   I enjoyed this and I concur with what our PoetFriend Inot2b has stated...

*~coco~*
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6 posted 07-04-2001 03:14 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Awesome, and I liked the way you let the last poem lead into this one, just fantastic work!

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
†~* Mysteria *~

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 07-04-2001 09:56 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

I have to say, I love this one!!  Go get 'em!!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 07-04-2001 10:35 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Poet deVine,
Just a comment on the writing. A plus
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9 posted 07-04-2001 04:39 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

personally. . . I've always thought that fireworks were in g flat. . .  

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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10 posted 07-05-2001 08:51 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Its so good to see your work flowing!  
Irish Rose
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11 posted 07-06-2001 06:55 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

there's a message to this one, and I got it~!

Denise
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12 posted 07-06-2001 08:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great writing, Sharon! I enjoyed this very much!
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13 posted 03-22-2015 11:06 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Makes me smile and cheer silently.

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