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Snowdwen
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0 posted 2001-07-03 08:02 PM



Can you tell me why?
Why do people try to run your life?
Say they understand when they have no clue.
They offer words of sorrow.
That you simply don't want or need
Why can't people
but out and run there own lives?
Instead of mine?
What is it?
Is my life so different than most?
That they have to be stuck in mine rather than there own?  
I just don't get it..
Can't they just go away and leave me alone?


  



"You live you learn and life moves on"


[This message has been edited by Snowdwen (edited 07-04-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-03 08:32 PM


May I tag on to your escape? I know! Let's vacation somewhere that there are no phones, no wires, no electricity...no...Oh No...no Passions!

Well, life is a give and take...

Enjoyed!

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2001-07-04 12:56 PM


So many voices in our lives..... sometimes it's so good just to get alone to sort them all out to ultimatly hear the most important voice of all.... the identity of You.  
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-07-04 05:34 AM


Like this Snowdwen...James
Snowdwen
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4 posted 2001-07-04 06:06 AM



Sunshine,

I'd love for you to join me in my escape.
I'm not so sure about going somewhere on  vacation where there are no phones, no wires, no electricity. Cause I'd miss Passions way too Much!  

Lighthousebob,

Right on Bob! I feel the same way. It is good to get away! Thank you!

James,
Glad you liked it!  

Rick
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5 posted 2001-07-04 09:20 AM


They who can feel your hurt
They who are happy to listen
A person you could call a friend
Just someone who cares enough to spend time and share words which may help

We all need friends more than solitude, don't you think?

Good read.

Rick

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-07-04 09:37 AM


They butt in as you call it because they care about you and are trying to help.  Maybe if you stopped being so angry and were a little more receptive you'd be happier. I'm with Rick, you can never have too many friends that care about you.  Interesting write.  Always good to vent.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Snowdwen
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7 posted 2001-07-04 10:27 AM


Rick,Lone Wolf,

Yes we do need friends, but would you want a friend to say "I'm sorry" every time you talked to them? I know she was just trying to make me feel better, but sometimes just hearing someone talk without the other pearson saying I'm sorry helps too yano?
Thank you both for your kind words!  
  

"You live you learn and life moves on"



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