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The love it deserves
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The love it deserves |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
At the end of the day, when the kids are asleep. I long to kiss your lips. The smoothness of you love, translates with each touch. And I'll give you, all that's good. My love, my kiss, my touch. Don't think, leave it all behind, the day, its stress. And give the end of the day, the love it deserves. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
and give the end of the day the love it deserves... what a wonderful line! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
The best way to end the day, Beautiful! [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 07-03-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful thoughts.... enjoyed this. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You definitly know how to end the day. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a lovely thought, walker.  All writing comes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yep, good plan to follow nice poem!! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Now that's a goodnight anyone could get used to...good one, walker! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You're such a sweet guy. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now that is smoother than Calgon! |
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