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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-07-02 10:40 PM


Summer Senryus

katy did you come
to sing my summer through me
grandest noise alive

lightning’s golden glow
in smallest system brightly
yards alight with life

summer swing freely
head back feet point heavenly
to be young again

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-02-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2001-07-02 10:43 PM


Hmmm...being thoughtful here...When I grow up, Sunshine, I want to write just like you!

jwesley

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2 posted 2001-07-02 10:44 PM


Oh, the memories this brings.  Wonderful, Sunshine!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-07-02 10:47 PM


ahh you're always young when you're swinging your heart out with toes pointed to the sky    this is a wonderful summertime poem!  It just warms the heart  
~Krista

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
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4 posted 2001-07-03 03:33 PM


Beautifully done, Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-07-06 08:11 PM


*brushes the dust off*

don't mind me my friend. . . just looking around back here. . . these are wonderful. . . summer memories. . . just what I need today. . .  

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6 posted 2001-07-06 08:25 PM


Beautifully done, Karilea! Let's go out and catch some lightning bugs!
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with you
7 posted 2001-07-06 10:38 PM



"summer swing freely
head back feet point heavenly
to be young again"

* still love to swing with my kids on the park playground   they think I'm crazy  

I loved this Sunshine  

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