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I Met 'Her' Today
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I Met 'Her' Today |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I didn't realize who she was until she mentioned your name she said you were somewhat famous that you had a little fame She seemed to be the opposite of the woman you described to me you said she was distant, cold and would never set you free Her gentle humor amazed me her smile was genuinely nice and when she told me how kind you are I swallowed once or twice I wanted to blurt out the truth of the lies he told about her I wondered who else he's used there are many more I'm sure My shame has been replaced with anger so hot it'll burn I intend to teach a lesson, sir, that only you can learn! The next time that I write of you will be to tell the truth of it Are you ready? Are you primed? Are you squirming where you sit? |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Bittersweet words, PdV... Ones that far too many women can attest to...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Flamin'!!!  Well written, message very clear!!<*\\\>< |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
It is indeed a surreal feeling....bizarre and for me in a similar situation...mortifying. After that...NO GOING BACK for me! Excellent reminder..... JULIE ****************************** |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, I like this one a lot!! All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This really made me think, Sharon. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sharon, YOU GO GIRL!! This poem rocked!! Just really awesome piece you've created...with some really intense emotions behind it. Now go get 'em  Now seriously...very wonderful poem. I can feel your anger. impressive. take care. amy  "but i see your true colors, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I AGREE WITH AIMEE......YOU GO GIRL!!!!!! YOU'VE SAID EVERYTHING I WISH I COULD SAY LATELY!!!!!!! YEPP YEPP YEPP.....YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
all the power and strength to you, and a few (((hugs))) too wow....let him have it!!! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Hell hath no fury........but surely we all know that more than one gets hurt in the less than golden triangle. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
great poem! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
"I wanted to blurt out the truth of the lies he told about her I wondered who else he's used there are many more I'm sure" You certainly have expressed the feelings that many of us have felt. Well done! |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
absolutely loved it ...almost as if I were eavesdropping awww I am still squirming for him |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep...'different strokes for different folks', 'one persons trash...etc.' Well written and truthfully descriptive my friend. jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Good one, Sharon. I hope a lot of squirming is happening, sounds well deserved. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
There's no defending all men cheat and lie for sure they are such scoundrels we know they must lie wife told different story women never lie women act the same whether with husband or friend you can be quite sure she would not demean be frigid, cold, off-putting or profane at all I met her you see she is so nice and charming he is a liar I am not minimizing ... only showing that there truly is another side of a coin that is not as obvious as others may think. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Outstanding Sharon! There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brother do you speak for many, with a power-packed poem, great job on this one. If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sharon - I have a great idea!!!! Kick his cat! That'll fix his wagon. As a matter of fact, if he doesn't have a cat, buy him one and THEN kick it! What's that? Ulterior motives? Me? How could you think that of a sweet old lovable sailor like me? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!!! There will be another installmant tomorrow. *and LngJhn, I think I will buy him a cat - but not to kick..she'll have litters and litters and litters of kittens all over his favorite old album collection!!  |
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