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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Haiku Princely robes are laid Tiding under mountains dew Blues in heather hues Flowering glory Homespun in the rising sun Morning has begun. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Blues in heather hues ========================= me thinks that lovely phrase and image will stay with me all day... me thanks you for that. You dont do these very often... but OH when you do  *ww*  meWe're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I hope your day will be as sweet as the mental rose I send today. Love ya |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice imagery in the form using so few wwords... good stuff!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What an impressive gift....thank you so much, Sy, for such a tender welcome to the new day.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy ~ Your haiku is a beautiful way to welcome the day!  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful visuals to begin my morning Sy ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you and I hope you have a beautiful day. Lady, Thank you for the read and sweet comment. *L* Milessa, I wish you that beautiful day. KIt, Have a good day dear Kit. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely images. Very nicely done. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
grand imaging here like the heather on the hill or a huge coating of vetch spreading its carpet across the hillside enjoyed this and Saturday I was able to enjoy my own view of vetch dressing each side of the road in places...lovely June/July! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, you have penned wonderful Haiku! I love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poeminister, Thank you so much. VAS, That's what I was talking about, thank you. Interloper, Thank you for the read and like. |
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