What is it??? - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2001-07-01 11:36 PM

Driven wild by your way
Caught desperately
Deep within myself
Seeing what I saw before
Deepness uncaptured
Uncaught not yeilding
Throughout the corners
Currents flowing by
Glowing images unforeseen
Oneness not existing
Troubled mirroring
Swallow the waves
Talk of the known
Meaning lost in language
Usage beyond interpretation
Listen closely
Souls gripping
Energies running parallel
In-between multiple dimensions
Thrashing rocking
Wondrous time
Constant struggle
Binding together
Soft whispers
Instance wondering
Natural rhythm of one
Spelllbinding colors swirl
Within our perplexed mind

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-07-02 07:28 AM

Soft whispers
Instance wondering
Natural rhythm of one
Spelllbinding colors swirl
Within our perplexed mind
========================

what is it???
me thinks its Chemistry

loved the way this one builds in intensity...
so nice to see your name here Blue...tis been a long time.
take care
jm

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-02 08:25 AM

enoyed this...

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2001-07-02 08:50 AM

Sounds to me that you might have been angry about another, carrying that torture within and tormenting your mind.

Good piece of writing, keep it up.

Rick

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-02 06:52 PM

frenzied. . . a dizzying pace with this one. . .

nice to see you again my friend. . .

------------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-07-02 07:06 PM

what is it? lovely captivity of heart, is it not?

White Wolf
Member

since 1999-09-18

Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland

6 posted 2001-07-03 04:27 PM

Sounds like a chaos I know about but never actually experienced. You portrayed it well.

The White Wolf

If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.