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Mixed Emotions |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Part One: Depressed Late and getting later I fear life passes by late and getting later Inside my heart I cry. Long and so much longer since true love lived with me long and getting longer a shadow all I see. Cold and growing colder without the warmth I crave cold and growing colder despite the love I gave. Dark and getting darker the moon hides from me now dark and geting darker it's time to take my bow. Part Two: Hopeful Close and coming closer the hopes and dreams I hold close and growing closer fulfillment of my soul. short and so much sweeter till touching with my heart short and so much sweeter no longer held apart. Warm and growing warmer with thoughts of life anew warm and growing warmer a love to fall into. Bright and glowing brighter the clouds are pushed aside bright and glowing brighter a turning of the tide. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sandra, this is so eloquently penned, I relate deeply to both emotions, thank you for sharing this~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully rhythmic Sandra ... you've expressed these emotions so beautifully. I love the "turning of the tide", it speaks of inspiration and anticipation for what is yet to come. Very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yep...but you knew I'd be here!!! You already know I can relate to the emotions expressed here, but also loved the format!!! It's all cycles...we really DO need to get together sometime...HUGS and enjoyed this much! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, for you Sandra, I rather see you in part 2...gentle smile, very nice write |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, How deeply touching and contemplative. I liked the use of the chapters. Always remember, when one ends, another does begin... Love, Elise |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WOW!! This is a beautiful piece - I so very much enjoyed the read......Roniece  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed the form and the feel of this.. well done indeed!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
lil sis...it's good to see you phasing into part II!!!!! Love this one from you!!!!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Emotions captured in a clear jar of honesty and placed on the well-lit window sill of the mind, to reflect in the heart that which saves us all -- hope. A most beautiful carving of feelings. I'm happy to see some warm rays of sunlight starting to shine through your window. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful how you wrote from depression to hope in the same piece |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
beautiful and true... I can't wait to see part three.  Esclandre |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sandra, We've all felt this way at sometime or another in our lives and you've penned these feelings well. Thank you. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
would that we could all stay with part II. . . is there more??? wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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