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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
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0 posted 2001-07-01 06:48 PM



Life Changes

Weaving of life's tapestry
The meaning of its mystery
Change just a stitch or two
A new pattern comes to view
Building on the one before
Until the old one is no more
Just a fragment here and there
Love can handle these with care
The present is our interface
Stitches dropped an others placed
Tie the future to the past
We can change the stitch at last
For we finally understand
It's we who guide the needles hand
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-07-01 06:55 PM


MAC, this is definately excellent advice, which I needed desperately today.  I am sooooo glad I stopped in for the read.  Now to tuck this into my box of treasures......and thank you....*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

athena4
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since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

2 posted 2001-07-01 06:57 PM


Mr Cat,
    This is so beautiful, and painted with perfection. You have told a story that is the tapestry of life, with all its changes and unknowns. Thanks for sharing.
        Elise

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2001-07-06 02:40 PM



Mr»ÄlleÿÇät-
   i'm liking this a whole bunch!!  
   you've woven the words so beautifully
   and haven't missed a stitch..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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