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together my love
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together my love |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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my love here is not where I want to be I want to be there with you where we can be where we can be together my love not here and there not here and there but everywhere together my love together my love here we are there we are there we are not here and there but everywhere but everywhere is where we are when we are there when we are there where we can be together my love together my love there with you here with me here with me there with you is where we are is where we are not here and there but everywhere but everywhere is where we are together my love together my love ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-01-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Well, Sir romance, yet again, I love it!  Excellent presentation and rearranging of words~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, being together is the best place that one can be. Wonderful write dear friend. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, When the one we love is in our hearts, they ARE with us "everywhere". Nicely done my friend. Love, Elise |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Be it here or there makes no difference as long as together. As always you know how to make words sing of love. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very creative sven..tender and romantic..enjoyed as always  ~Victoria~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love does rule the world, and I think it has a hold on you, too Another beauty here. Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause! What a wonderfully unique piece Sven ... the presentation gave it such exceptional depth, very well done, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You are a......Genius, Sven his read like two voices in my head, I love it! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a romantic echo you have my friend |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I continue to be amazed at how your mind words, and how much you do to inspire the rest of us.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, thank you. . .just an idea. . . GS, you're right. . . thank you my friend. . . Elise, I hope that you're right. . . thank you for reading. . . inot2b, I try. . . I really do. . . thank you. . . Victoria, always happy to know that you've enjoyed. . . Sandra, it always has my friend. . . thank you. . . Kit, thank you. . . the form was an idea of mine. . . I pictured this being read like kind of an "echo". . . glad that you enjoyed. . . walker, genius?? Well, not really, but you have the right idea about two voices. . . Interloper, until the end of time my friend. . .thank you. . . Lady, my mind works in some strange ways. . . and I'm glad to inspire you. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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