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athena4
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0 posted 2001-07-01 12:37 PM


            One Day At The Pharmacy

It was mid-afternoon,
and the line wasn't too long.
There was a small old woman,
in a brown tattered coat
standing ahead of me.

As I became distracted,
spying a magazine on a rack
I clumsily dropped my prescription slip.
The slip became airborn,
as it danced and landed at this old woman's foot.

Before I could claim it,
the little figure slowly bent down,
turned around, and handed it to me.
Her face was a tapestry of wrinkles,
etched from years of experiences.
But her eyes were soft and bright.
Loving and sweet like an angel.
She smiled at me, like a little child,
and handed me the slip.

I gently took the slip from her shaking hand,
and thanked her very much.
The counter became available
as she moved up in line.
The pharmacist presented her with a small bottle,
quoted the price,
and with disbelief,
my ears heard "$100".

The old woman fumbled in her pocketbook,
her hand still shaking
and said "Oh dear, I have to get food, too.
I am sorry for your trouble"

At that moment,
with every fiber of my being,
I wanted to buy that bottle
for this sad small soul,
but I could not.
For I did not have the resources
to make it all better.

I was angry.
Angry at myself for not being able to assist.
Deeply disappointed in the pharmacy
for having to follow the "rules".
And outraged at the "system" and the injustice
for forcing our elderly to choose
between nourishment and medication.

She turned from the counter,
head down, still clutching her pocketbook,
and hobbled towards the door.
The bottle of pills, still sitting on the counter.

I just wanted to reach out,
and take her in my arms
and let her know someone cared.
But I could not.

As I watched her heading for the exit,
her tiny figure becoming even smaller,
a man stared...
a child pointed...
      ...And I cried.


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VAS
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1 posted 2001-07-01 12:58 PM


It really huts when you can't help, doesn't it.  This should be sent to our congressmen, especially the ones that are against prescription drugs being part of medicare.
athena4
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2 posted 2001-07-01 01:11 PM


VAS,
   Thank you for the sweet reply. It does hurt so to see the injustices and lack of concern given to so many souls in need. And a Congressman may indeed read this, but would he and his brethren have enough compassion to change the system?  It's a comfort to know that people like you can take it to heart, but sadly we do not have the power to turn the tables.  Thanks for reading.
            Elise

Sven
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3 posted 2001-07-01 01:46 PM


a sad commentary. . . on an all too real problem. . .

you've shown it well here elise. . .

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athena4
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4 posted 2001-07-01 01:53 PM


Sven,
    Thank you, my friend.  I knew with a heart as big as yours, you would understand..
    Love, Elise

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-07-01 02:00 PM


We DO have the power, but it will take each and every individual to exercise it in order for a change to happen...  THAT, unfortunately seems to be where the ideal is never actualized because complacency, ignorance, and selfishness are much easier paths to travel.  A very moving description, Elise, and I can totally empathize with what you have presented here.  This inspires me to post another poem, "WE GO ON (APATHY KILLS)"...  thank you for spurring us to think...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

athena4
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6 posted 2001-07-01 02:09 PM


Mark,
   Thank you so much. If only those in power with the ability to alter the system, had the capacity to look through the smokescreen of the monetary return and view those in need as souls equal to them, and not statistics. As the saying goes, "Even the longest of journeys begins with the first step". Maybe someday...
         Elise

Victoria
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7 posted 2001-07-01 02:14 PM


So sad..and quite scary to put yourself in her place down the road..good thing im not a pharmacist i would end up giving all the medicine away ha..
athena4
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8 posted 2001-07-01 02:20 PM


Victoria,
    Thanks for reading. And yes, I too would be giving all the medicine away, and not feel guilty a bit!
       Elise

SmittenKitten
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9 posted 2001-07-01 02:33 PM


Such a sad reality....the world needs more kind souls like you to obliterate the injustices.  
~Krista

athena4
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10 posted 2001-07-01 02:40 PM


Krista,
    Thank you so much.  I'm sure anyone who witnessed that sad scene (and certainly all the huges hearts on the Forum!) would feel the same way.  Compassioniate, but desperately helpless, nonetheless.
         Elise

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-07-01 03:19 PM


Without medical insurance I don't know how any of us will be able to afford the high cost of medicine and drugs...James
catalinamoon
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12 posted 2001-07-01 05:40 PM


Good points made here, it brings to mind a story a friend told me, about an old man that was at the store ahead of her husband, and did not have enough money for his cigarettes. I know they are not as important as medicine. But this old man had brought pennies, and was just a little short, and sadly walked away from the counter. And her husband said wait, and bought them and gave them to the old man. A small kindness, but it would be nice if these types of things could be done more often.
It's horrible to have to choose between food and medicine. I think we need a complete anarchy in this country to recover it. But I better not say that too loud..shh.

S

athena4
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13 posted 2001-07-01 05:47 PM


James,
    Touche' to that!  It's frightening to think of those who do not have the coverage.
Thanks for reading.
           Elise

athena4
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14 posted 2001-07-01 05:51 PM


Sandra,
     You and I are only too familiar with the inequities in this world.  But just knowing there are people who care, makes the
trevails a little easier...
         Love, Elise

JLR
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15 posted 2001-07-01 10:09 PM


Elise---I smiled sadly as I read Victoria's response to your poem...because I am a pharmacist.  Better I should say, I hold a license to practice pharmacy, though have not actively used it for several years.  And the scenario your poem painted is one of the reasons why I have chosen to pursue another career.  I can't tell you how many times I saw exactly this happen, how many times I paid for the prescription myself...and not just the elderly, but parents who could not afford antibiotics for their children.  And one day I'll never forget, an old man whose wife had died brought her medication back to the pharmacy because it had been so expensive, he didn't want it to go to waste and he thought we could give it to someone who needed it but couldn't afford to pay for it.  I can't tell you how many memories flooded through me when I read your poem...both happy and sad.  But I can say without a doubt, that the system is not going to change and I do not regret for a minute that I am no longer part of it...though often now, it is me who can't afford to pay for the prescription.
athena4
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16 posted 2001-07-02 08:07 AM


J,
    Oh, what sad inequities you have witnessed. I'm near tears just reading your reply. And for the ederly, the children, and anyone who cannot pay, there is no justice.I can unequivocally understand why you chose another path.  I'm not putting down the profession, by any means, we need them, and the rules are not theirs to make. I hope you are happy in your new career, and you are a very kind soul. Thanks for reading.
              Elise

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