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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-01 05:04 AM


7/1/01

I DON’T KNOW

I don’t know
What else the rules of love are
People meet and then separate
No one ever find the whole world
Some find sky and even some don’t the earth
Every one is busy in its own
I have Love
But have no one to share it
I don’t know
When we will separate
Because
We all are on the same journey
I don’t know
When we will change  
Because
Life is like a sight
We were talking about this world
Which has a habit of forgetting
Why you are angry with me
I don’t know
What else the rules of love are
When you made me cry
Up to my full heart
Then you become a little bit happy
I don’t know
What else the rules of love are

  ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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1 posted 2001-07-01 06:32 AM


Love has many ways

Great poem

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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-07-01 12:31 PM


Wasi---If you figure those rules out, please clue me in ok?  Enjoyed much!
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3 posted 2001-07-01 07:58 PM


Wasi, those darn rules are changing all the time, so you have to make them up as you go, and of this you spoke well.  I liked it!

If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job!    ~* Mysteria *~

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-07-01 08:04 PM


It all happens for a reason I believe, although it would be nice to know the rules ahead of time!  Very thought provoking write, Waseem.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
Posts 240

5 posted 2001-07-02 01:34 AM


I play to the rules waseem ,,but they keep moving the goal posts ....    very nice poetry
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
6 posted 2001-07-02 01:38 AM


Very nice write, my friend, a question you ask that has been asked all the ages, for they change for each encounter...gentle smile
Waseem Cheema
Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan
7 posted 2001-07-02 03:32 AM


I am very greatful to you all for such nice comments.......I love you
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