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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-07-01 12:44 PM


A story, here, of Poet Old
Who hung a heavy heart
And though the tale was then untold
We’ll find a place to start

Upon a house, upon a street
Without a picket fence
There lay a boy so incomplete
That all would turn and wince

He knew of love and dreamt of kiss
A taste of which he longed
But more did he remember this
Then he could put to song

He could not play the lover’s wind
Though strummed the strings were he
He might have been undisciplined
To know what love should be

To him, true love was many things
But not to be defined
And then a stir of heart would bring
A need to fill the mind

On the floor, in somber kneeling
Whispers oh so eloquent
Waxing all of what he’s feeling
For he's sure its heaven sent

He keeps the candle burning low
He is the poet’s mold
Formed from wax born in the flow
So quick the wick is old

He dies alone wrapped in his words
Buried within the tongue
He shouts them now although unheard
Why not when he was young?

“I love you life! I love you world!”
He decays within the ground
Where once expressions softly hurled
Now poet’s peace is found

A boy, to man, to death, is told
In not so many lines
For now the folly I’ve seen unfold
And I wish to here resign!

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-01-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2001-07-01 01:30 AM


Walt--you are one of a kine...do not resign.  Loved this poets tale.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-07-01 01:46 AM


Oh Walt...this breaks my heart with its beauty. You can't resign yourself from life. Life finds you and wakes you up again, RUDELY. (OH...LISTEN TO ME, willya?   )

I love this. But the only resignation is the fact that you MUST write. HUGS.

azblond
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3 posted 2001-07-01 03:06 AM


RESIGNATION REFUSED!! Hee Hee...loved this, missed you my friend!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Nan
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4 posted 2001-07-01 08:42 AM


NO Quitting Allowed...!!!... NOPE..

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-07-01 08:44 AM


With lines like these...

...Formed from wax born in the flow
So quick the wick is old...

you're not allowed to do anything but pen us some more wonders...

there!  Task set.  Now, do!

Balladeer
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6 posted 2001-07-01 09:23 AM


Hey, wait a minute, Walt, my man
Just take a step and back up.
You ain't going anywhere 'cause
Who would make us crack up??

Titanic had its iceberg there
St. Andreas has it's fault.
The Far East has tsunamis and
At Passions we have WALT!!!  

thank the Lord...



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-07-01 10:27 AM


Walt,
Good write I enjoyed the read.

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2001-07-01 11:38 AM


now i am not gonna resign yuh i am just getting started, so no more replies like that see yeah see?
elisaseyes
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9 posted 2001-07-01 06:02 PM


Yes! You will never resign, and come to bed!
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2001-07-01 06:05 PM


Very nice write, Walt.  There's a moral in here somewhere.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Nan
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11 posted 2001-07-02 10:25 PM


Resigned to Begin.. wayout..

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