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Waseem Cheema
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0 posted 2001-06-30 04:22 PM


BAHNAIN
SISTERS


Kitni he masoom hoti hain yeh piyari bahnain
How much innocent the sweet sisters are
Kitni he bholi hoti hain yeh piyari bahnain
How much simple the sweet sisters are

Apni yadain choer kar babul k ghur main
Leaving their memories at father's home
Kudh parai ho jati hain yeh piyari bahnain
Use to become their selves strangers, these sweet sisters  

Kitni khushi hoti hey humain uss waqat jub
How much we become happy when
English main pass ho jati hain yeh piyari bahnain
Passed their English examination, these sweet sisters

Her mushkil main bun jati hain sahara yeh hamara
They become our support in every difficulty
Kis kadar bhaeyoon k naz uthati hain yeh piyari bahnain
How much take responsibilities of brothers, these sweet sisters

Mari too yahi dua yeh jiss hall main bi hain
Its my prayer, whatever..wherever, they are living
sudda yunhein muskurati raheen yeh piyari bahnain
Always keep smiling, these sweet sisters

Bahnoon ki qadar un say phooch kar dakhoo Waseem
Ask the values of sisters to those Waseem
Jin ki hoti naheen hein koe piyari bahnain
Who there have no sweet sisters


~Wasi~

**Usually some sisters not show so much interst in English subject while studying...in East...  




I love to nice poetry.

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-01-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-30 04:29 PM


...Her mushkil main bun jati hain sahara yeh hamara
They become our support in every difficulty...

for some reason, Waseem, this line seems to be very important and touches me.  Thank you!

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2 posted 2001-07-01 02:26 AM


Yanno...I truly love your work.

Please don't stop posting. You give me insight to the heartbeat of other lands and new understanding that somehow translates--
THE SAME.

Peace, Waseem.

Oh, and hey? what does Waseem mean?

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3 posted 2001-07-01 03:47 AM


ahhhh waseem a longing for your sisters ...and then they have babies  and present them to you ,Uncle waseem ...  they never become   strangers  and they will never stop mothering a little  brother ...nice poem
Waseem Cheema
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4 posted 2001-07-02 03:37 AM


I am very greatful to you all especially serenity..........thanx
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5 posted 2001-07-05 11:14 PM


Waseem~
This is special !
~*Marge*~


BP~

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6 posted 2001-07-05 11:18 PM


Hey Wasi  

this is really wonderful  


"Mari too yahi dua yeh jiss hall main bi hain
Its my prayer, whatever..wherever, they are living
sudda yunhein muskurati raheen yeh piyari bahnain
Always keep smiling, these sweet sisters"


liked this very much  

Waseem Cheema
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7 posted 2001-07-06 06:22 AM


Hi,

Thanx for this appriciation ......I am very glad to read your commentts..........

A   from me to you all

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