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Sheerness of Gossamer
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Sheerness of Gossamer |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Well-kept secrets lie within my boudoir beneath a canopy of delicate lace cobwebbed sheets recite the history of sultry lovers screaming, crying in the night like an incubus entangled within an orgasmic past dusty goblets of a Chardonnay once dripping with crimson passion fingerprints upon a lonesome headboard captures lovers in the night sheerness of gossamer clings to a bedpost gardenia lingering upon a pillow mulberry pillars, wicks burned to ashes roses pressed between pages of eternity now just slight chills upon my neck Well-kept secrets linger upon my spine silhouettes waltz in corridors of my mind Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
But you've the memory and its moment captured well. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quite lovely, Victoria.... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Victoria, WOW!! This is a masterpiece of imagery that touches the soul and won't let go. Beautiful!!!! Elise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This bedroom sounds more exciting than mine! dang! I enjoyed reading this one, Victoria....going shopping for some new sheets!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Amazing write, Vic. You tell it so well. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you folks..get some satin sheets kathleen ..just dont slip out of bed haa.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this speaks your name my friend. . . very much so. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
On my best day my bedroom wouldn't be that exciting and it it was My husband would probably think I'd gone nuts. Glad somebody life is exciting anyway. Good Poem! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sven and lisa..i appreciate your kind comments.. ~Victoria Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, your gorgeous imagery always makes me smile, sweet friend, may your heart forever shine with laughter and true love as soft as silk and as sheer as gossamer! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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