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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-30 11:19 AM



In Feathered Finesse

~*Marge Tindal*~

~
~
~
so
softly
in feathering
finessed thought
truly is treasured
it cannot be bought
ribbon of memories
on gentle recalling
within open heart
gently falling
feathered
finesse
of
us
~


~My appreciation to ETHome for this inspiration

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-30 11:23 AM


*sigh* you always know how to impress me with your creativity....you are such a gifted soul....love you Marge.

((hugs))
Charisma


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2 posted 2001-06-30 12:07 PM


another beautiful title..loved it marge

                     ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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3 posted 2001-06-30 01:07 PM


Simply great!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

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4 posted 2001-06-30 01:46 PM


Marge.......Very nice ..beautifully designed...
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5 posted 2001-06-30 02:26 PM


My appreciation to Ethome as well, for opening up this inspire in you....

excellent, Marge....excellent....

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6 posted 2001-06-30 05:38 PM


Charisma~
Thank you for allowing me to share of 'gift'.

Victoria~
Glad it drew you in, my friend.

Voiceless~
Thank you so very much.

Waseem~
Pleased to know you enjoyed it, friend.

Karilea~
He touched my muse's fancy in a reply to another piece.
Isn't that just one of the greatest things about this place ???
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-06-30 07:20 PM


Softly penned...beautiful.
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8 posted 2001-06-30 07:22 PM



Marge-
   beautiful, my friend..
   his inspiration looks good on you..

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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9 posted 2001-06-30 10:34 PM


PoeMinister~
Thank you for the soft reply.

Vicky~
Yeah .... I think so too.
I asked JanetMarie to read it to Mark,
I know he'll enjoy it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-06-30 11:13 PM


Marge:  Beautifully written and presented!

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2001-06-30 11:15 PM


Marge, I love everything about this poem    great work!
~Krista

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12 posted 2001-06-30 11:44 PM


BettyLou~
My Sister-Of-The-Circle..I'd have known for sure you'd enjoy it.
Thank you so much.

SmittenKitten~
Thank you for your purrrrrfect reply !
I love your ID name.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2001-07-01 12:35 PM


I shall speak to ethome about "touching" your muse, naughty, naughty I am just kidding! Oh what an beauty of remembering this one was, and "a feather"!  My, but you truly amaze me ~ first with the poetry then the images you can draw with words...I tried it (exact words) looked like a hoof   Really loved the graphic (if it was bigger I'd steal it!)

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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14 posted 2001-07-01 11:21 AM


Mysteria~
Ya' put a big smile on this face with your attempt at a 'hoof' !
LOL !  
Ahhhh ... but the graphic is as tiny as a feather-finessed thought~

Glad you enjoyed this ...
and ETHome, don't listen to her ...
you can touch my muse anytime !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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15 posted 2001-07-01 04:17 PM


YOU ARE SO COOL!!!
and this one prints out as I type...
yes...will share this...
sorry it took me so long to get here...
darn puter  
love ya White Feather
jm

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

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16 posted 2001-07-02 08:22 PM


JanetMarie~
You is a sweetie what is !
Love ya', gal !
~*WillowWhiteFeather*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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