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The meek
Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 16
Australia

0 posted 2001-06-30 09:11 AM


When we begin,
We start to fade,
You make the course,
It isnt pre-made,

When following your dreams,
Dont think about how,
Just go out and do it,
Your life is now.

We must read the lines before we read between the lines.

© Copyright 2001 The meek - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-30 09:15 AM


Good advice from down under...I see you're a thinking bunch down there......I hope you enjoy Passions...a late welcome from me!
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-06-30 09:38 AM


Wonderful advice.  Don't sit back and watch life pass you by.  Get out there and live it!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2001-06-30 06:23 PM


Right on!  If the past is but a memory and the future but a dream, what do we have left, but what's in between?

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-07-06 01:40 AM


I like this. I've been giving much thought to how many things I haven't tried, if only due to that nasty insistant inner voice that seems to rage against me. A great message. And tonight I find strenght in these wonderful blue pages.
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-06 09:16 AM


yep..nicely tighly said .. enjoyed!!

Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
6 posted 2001-07-06 02:14 PM


*sigh*
easier said than done...
but excellent sentiments, indeed.

a good mantra  

"You gotta love livin 'cause dyin's a pain in the ass."
-Frank Sinatra

shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
7 posted 2001-07-06 02:22 PM


   Good poem with excelent advice. Thats how we find our dreams with wholly shoes on our feet.
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