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Snake Oil
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Snake Oil |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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this one this man wants me-- he told me so, no disbelief. No hesitance within his voice- as if he never had a choice-- eyes in steady, steely, gaze... unwavering (he sang my name.) This one loves me I am sure. I pay the price-- snake oil, procured... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ya don't go out in the desert without your snake boots on Ya don't lay down on the railway tracks until the train has gone. Ya don't swim out in deep water with your pockets full of stones. Ya don't fall deep into loving if there's snake oil on your bones. Just cause I don't want ya to get hurt Celeste.....but hey! go get'em tigeress! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I LOVE THIS..AND LOVE YOU...thanks...sometimes it's a task to figure out why yer sinkin....even when ya write it yourself!!! yer a doll...luv ya much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no disbelief. No hesitance within his voice- as if he never had a choice-- eyes in steady, steely, gaze... unwavering (he sang my name.) This one loves me I am sure. ====================== does this exist ... *sigh of complacentcy* ... and yer reply to Eric is a poetic as this lil gem of rhyme and metaphor ... the task of figuring out why we're sinking... when ya learn the serect...send vials. hugs me We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh It could only happen to you....I think you need to take that magnet out of your pocket missy!!! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
this one creates many images, both good and not so. It is a like a shaman ritual, a vision and you know how I feel about visions lately. Hope the desert has brought you something beautiful.  "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect,and you know I KNOW it! Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM, Sharon, brian and Sandra? Thanks for reading---I had fun last nite, couldja tell? Oh...and sharon? He really DID sing my name...lol... "Hey, Karenanne, what's your game girl, can anybody play?" ---I would have smacked him, but he kissed me too quick!   |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Like. Like. Like. |
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