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Cast Ye Now . . . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Cast Ye Now ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Cast ye now to carouseled winds the embers of desire turning ~ turning ever burning within the soul on fire Spun to life on soft breeze blown across a heart in need yearning ~ yearning ever turning within a soul takes seed Trail of smoke now rising at the fireside of a friend turning ~ burning ever yearning Back from whence it flew Lit with ember of soft remember brings me back to you turning ~ turning ever burning ~Seymour ... O' how I thank you~ ~Your inspiration is a treasure~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful flow and meter in this Marge.. nice use of sound and image to convey the emotions..I enjoyed!!! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh, Yes! carousel of wind... heard this one out there...had to come in and see! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful, just beautiful. WOW! [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-29-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Lit with ember of soft remember brings me back to you turning ~ turning ever burning" Marge, yes......you always say what I can't  and so eloquently too |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I felt myself turning in the piece. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- simply wonderful, my friend.. he certainly did inspire a beauty!  hugs to you, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ Thank you so much. LadyInWhite~ Glad to know you caught the brass ring, sweet lady. InterLoper~ Why ... thank you, sir. SEA~ Perhaps I'm sent to 'say' it for you, sweetie. Thanks my friend. SecretWhisper~ I am pleased to know you enjoyed the carousel of the piece. Vicky~ Thanks for the hug ... right back at ya' ! Seymour could inspire the bud of the rose to bloom in December's chill ! He's a charmer. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Hauntingly beautiful!I loved it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, a very lovely piece, Marge, I felt like I was floating...gentle smile |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a luscious incantation...and I agree...sy is such a sweetheart! I love the rhythm of this piece...so...sexy? (sorry m.o.m.s.--but it IS) Big smiles and warm hugs! (but er...not that warm..hehee...sort of luke...) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I think it just flew from Seymour's thoughts to my pen~ I'm glad it did ! Logan~ To levitate the spirit of another is to lift my own~  Thank you, friend. Serenity~ The rhythm IS kinda ... Sy-xxy, huh ? I like 'Luke' ... isn't he one of those sexy roofers ?  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nice and effectively done...enjoyed this very much. PM "..And deem each hour to musing given a step upon the road to Heaven" --Sir Walter Scott (from Marmion) |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I love the flow of this piece... the almost sing song meter carries the reader gently through the poem as it reveals its message. Very well done! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well this lifted me to the rafters girlfriend. What a light and airy piece of poety, and it tickled my very soul, and yes I loved it. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Wonderful!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once again Marge...a great write with just the right amount of heritage flavour and finesse! Keep it up! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ I thank you, friend. Rascalx~ Appreciate knowing you enjoyed the rhythm. Mysteria~ Now I like the very idea of *soul-tickling* !  ETHome~ Ooooooooh .... you've just given me a moment of inspire ! Thank you for enjoying this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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