Still traveling with my muse . . . another hint concealed within

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Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-29 02:22 PM

Just the two of us             a journey begun
     Miles of traveling to go         companion of my heart
On to the unknown             horizons unfold
~*~
Destiny leads us                 life, everlasting
   following converging paths     merging present with the past
            mutual journey                taking our first steps
~*~
paths converge at last              a bump in the night
will that be the only merge      thumps the surge of urge in we
     would delight follow             warmth comes sauntering

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-29 02:33 PM

"paths converge at last              a bump in the night
  will that be the only merge      thumps the surge of urge in we
   would delight follow             warmth comes sauntering"

Good trip!   Clever perspective and evocative when it comes to a muse....enjoyed it!

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-29 02:37 PM

I need a hint that is a little less subtle......go for blunt

blunt works for me LOL

I liked this very much

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-06-29 02:41 PM

Your muse, Sir....is one busy creature...may she inspire you always!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-29 02:46 PM

et ~ Evocative ... that word likes me

Thank you my friend.

SEA ~ As much as I'd like to accomodate you, this time, sadly, I cannot. glad you like it though

Lady ~ What a nice wish. Do your wishes often come true ... I hope so

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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SEA

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with you

5 posted 2001-06-29 02:49 PM

ok.....

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-06-29 02:51 PM

With Muse songs singing
on staged heart
applause follows hopes

very nicely done Interloper... and I agree and wish for you a long relationship with your muse...for the words are a blessing to those of us who read.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-06-29 02:59 PM

SEA ~ Thet doan mean Ah doan luv ewe enny moor

Ron ~ My Muse only adds luster to my dismal offerings. Any blessing would come from, or belong to, my Muse.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Cpat Hair

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Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-06-29 03:15 PM

Interloper.. I have to gently disagee.. no dismal offerings from you at all.. but if your Muse adds a luster to them...I consider it our blessing

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2001-06-29 09:18 PM

This is so intriguing!!! I love how you're doing this sir!

Are these 'titles' of poems your muse has posted here?

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-06-29 10:06 PM

Wow, this is a great one Interloper. I love the form. Excellent!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

11 posted 2001-06-29 10:55 PM

"I think I know
said she to he
I think I know
who "muse" may be
but tis a secret
'tween you and me"

Always a pleasure to read your words, Interloper...

*smiles*
~Tier

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

12 posted 2001-06-29 11:26 PM

Enjoyed the side by side style...wonderful write.

PM

"..And deem each hour to musing given
a step upon the road to Heaven"
--Sir Walter Scott (from Marmion)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2001-06-30 03:21 AM

Yanno, I may be reading this wrong, but you seem to be the cat that swallowed the canary (oh brother, is that an old one!)

Say, you and your muse sound a little friendly to me! I loved the style of this and the poem but now...are we to be guessing where you and this little dish are headed to, where you've been, or what you're up to?

I re-read it and it still reads to me as a teensie bit x-rated! LOL, oopsie. Just kidding!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

14 posted 2001-06-30 08:16 AM

Very Cool!

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2001-06-30 01:30 PM

Ron ~ I deeply appreciate your thoughts and "gentle disagreement."

Poet deVine ~ Thank you ... don't you just LOVE intrigue?
No, but good try

Lone Wolf ~ Thanx

You are too kind.

Tiers ~ You mean you don't want the grand prize of a two-day, all expense paid weekend in beautiful downtown Del Rio, Texas, in August? Hmmmmmmmm

PM ~ Hmmmm. Side-by-side. Yes, I like that term

Mysteria ~ Shhhhhhhhhhh! Quiet! You get in trouble with the Poetry Police for comments like that

RSWells ~ Just what we need in Texas in July ... cool

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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