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The Hyde of Jekkel
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The Hyde of Jekkel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: The Hyde of Jekkel It's something here inside to blame, That makes me fly like moth to flame. An essence that was born within, That plays me like a violin. Present me to the feminine And something happens here within. My inside goes to hormone change, A metamorphic rearranges. I vibrate from hard to mellow, Like a sweet note on a cello. I smile a softer attitude, Beyond my normal latitude. Like something turns a subtle key And opens primal pride in me. And I do things I would not do. It seems to me I actually coo. It is a strong primitive call But then again aren't they all? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sy, you're just a good healthy red blooded American boy, that's all! "It is a strong primitive call But then again aren't they all?" .... Don't feel like the lone ranger we're all affected like that! Be careful with this line..... "I vibrate from hard to mellow," |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Is that what it is? I thought at my age it passes like hot flashes? LOL Thank you ethome I enjoyed your answer. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When all is beyond wise and sage should love not come to any age? let the moth fan the flame of man and allow yet love it's final stand... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I know exactly what you mean, Sy. Perhaps it's "the true gentleman" which is conjured by the presence of a lady. Chivalry remains alive and well in a few of us... Enjoyed your poem. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) Well I think you just about covered it... enjoyed this. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is quite stirring. It proves you’re not dead, yet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you Sunshine. *L* Mark, Thank you for the nice comment. Cpat Hair, Glad you enjoyed. Inot2B, Yea it stires me too. LOL Thanks for the read and comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's something here inside to blame, That makes me fly like moth to flame. An essence that was born within, That plays me like a violin. ============================= I vibrate from hard to mellow, Like a sweet note on a cello. I smile a softer attitude, Beyond my normal latitude. Like something turns a subtle key And opens primal pride in me. And I do things I would not do. It seems to me I actually coo. It is a strong primitive call But then again aren't they all? ========================== You're no moth ... you're the flame its not you ... that ole Randy dragon is to blame You better keep him caged ... put up a dragnet cause Im telling you .. that dragon is a chick magnet!!! *L*  *winkiewinkie*  me**smiling at sunshine** **something to make you and Randy coo     We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say. ~E. McCain [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-29-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now I really like this - very clever!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
COOOO-COOOOOO-COOL...... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
great work.... impressive... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, How did you get to know so many dragons? Thank you sweet, love ya Sy Melissa, I'll try, thank you *L* Nan, That's the coolest cool, hugs and kisses back Sudhir, Big thanks for the inpressed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The hyde of Jekyl you cannot hide For in the self of smoldered eye Breathes the flame that will not die Cast ye now to carouseled wind the embers of desire Burn, baby burn ! ... Randy's got the FIRE ! I just love you ! ! Oh ... I like ya' poetry too !  'I smile a softer attitude' Now ... this one likes my heart very much !  Love n' hugs n' Randy stuff~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-29-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hey Marge you got Randy blowing fire and I don't know if I can put it out. LOL Hugs and kisses. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Chivalrous Seymour, you do know how to get the ladies attention, don't you? *G* This is wonderful... SMOOCH! (just thought I'd sneak that in *G*) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thanks for the smooch, kisses and hugs back. |
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