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I Wear You
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I Wear You |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I wear you like a cherished locket between the cleavage of my breasts close to the beating of my heart I wander nakedly, without you bathing in fragrant memories drowning in magnolia bouquet no longer my ray of sunshine I am but a porcelain china doll cascading rivulets of candlelight and yellow roses in ginger hair as fiery moonlight drapes a sarong over the shoulder of a memory a trellis weaving forget- me- nots echoes lovingly, our torch song Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This poem is so romantically classy! A very enjoyable read! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, geez, Victoria, I love the way you write these...gentle smile |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love this romantic piece. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is so gracefully elegant~ Has a soft Victorian flavor to it ... know what I mean ? I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Victoria... I liked this poem very much. It left me speechless.... See, I am still struggling for words...  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic, haven't read anything quite like this...haven't ever wrote anything quite like this, very unique |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very sweet...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ethome..thank you very much..always nice to hear from you ethome  logan..thank you for you kind comments. Charisma..thank you for peeking in.. hugss marge..thank you marge..only graceful in my writing haa.. jessica..just close your eyes and write what you see. Sometimes its a little misty but than starts to develop sometimes instantly. passing shadows..thank you, i made quite a few changes before i was satified with it..i do alot of editing before i am finished.. james..Just like you Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I enjoyed this for its imagery and soft romantic tone... I could see an overdose of your words might indded turn even the hardnosed into a romantic sort... keep writing them!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful, your words of romance. these lines were most powerful to me: "as fiery moonlight drapes a sarong over the shoulder of a memory a trellis weaving forget- me- nots echoes lovingly, our torch song" Perfect. Thanks for more romance in this unromantic life I live. Sandra |
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