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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-06-28 07:02 PM




Mermaids Voices

Come, drift with me
Upon waves of mystery
In harmony by Ocean’s song
Mermaids voices hums along

Come, prepare to lose your whole
Into my wide mysterious pole
Merge inside gorgeous history
As I tell my deep blue story

Close your eyes with anticipation
As you roam through wondrous sensation
Where emerald pearls aloft to height
And splashes down within my cry

Hear oh hear my sounds of spell
How voices echoes in every shell
As I wash my treasured lap
Oh don’t spoil me with your crap

Don’t you hear my begging song
Mermaids hums my plea along
Upon waves of mystery
Come and sing that song for me

Help to safe my waves of beauty
To behold my depths of purity
Let me stay my mysterious self
Please feel free to be ocean’s elf



Charisma
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28/06/01


[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-29-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-28 07:04 PM


Ocean's elf...Charisma!  How lovely this is!
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2 posted 2001-06-28 08:14 PM


Charisma,
Splendid writing in here, well done

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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3 posted 2001-06-28 09:23 PM


Hi, I like this, mermaids are one of my most loved themes.
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-06-28 11:38 PM


Charisma~
You adorable little mermaid, you ! !
It's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good to see you.

Lovely thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-06-29 04:08 AM



Sunshine: thank you for the lovely  

Daniel: Thank you for your kind reply my friend  


Catalanimoon: yeah I love mermaids too....glad you liked it.

Marge: My Beautiful friend......it is always good to see you too...as I love the smiles in your comments.....  

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-29-2001).]

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6 posted 2002-03-24 12:23 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love mermaids, I love mermaids, they are my favorite things of all and I have fallen in love with them ever since I was a little boy! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo heavenly, sweet friend, I just have to add this to my library, this is a true gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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