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Logan
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0 posted 2001-06-28 06:49 PM


There will come a time when the Earth grows sick and
when it does a tribe will gather from all the cultures
of the World who believe in deed and not words.
They will work to heal it.

They will be known as the "Warriors of the Rainbow."


~An Ancient Cree Indian Proverb~

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“Eyes of Fire” uttered out the cry,
one day soon, our way of life will die.
Yo-ne-gis’ greed stalks the land,
all will be plundered by their hand.
Birds will fall, fish will not be,
water will blacken, trees you will not see.

A time will come of keepers arise,
to spread the word even to the skies.
It is no matter from where they come,
all tribes and nations will furnish some.
Their deeds and words they will sow
bearing the name, “Warriors of the Rainbow”

An awesome task ahead of them,
making Elohi beautiful, once again.
Principles be, of the ancient tribes,
Unity-Love-Understanding, being the guides.
Seeking the beauty of the Master of Life,
creating harmony, ending all strife.

If a chill you feel on these words you see,
it could be the stirring of the warrior you be.
Ancient in the soul, waiting for the call,
tasks will be great and many will fall.
Awake your warrior for Elohi’s sake,
Warrior of the Rainbow, you will make.


© Copyright 2001 Logan - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-06-28 06:52 PM


Oh WOW do love that.

Titia

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-28 06:52 PM


"If a chill..."

did you ever have that correct...half way down the read, goosebumps were sliding up my legs and arms....

and then I read that you had already seen that those who know would feel the chill...

oh my....

I guess I know a little more now than I did before...

This is wonderful Logan...but I have come to expect that from you...

Charisma
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3 posted 2001-06-28 07:09 PM


eloquent spoken and so true.
so true.

Charisma

Logan
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4 posted 2001-06-28 07:16 PM


Titia, thank you for the read, and the words of enjoyment. They mean much to me, and you are so kind to say so.

Sissie, very gentle smile, you are just too kind

Charisma, yes, quite true,I believe..thank you for being here and for the read and kind words

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5 posted 2001-06-28 07:30 PM


Hi!

"If the truth can be told so as to be understood it will be believed"

that comes from here: http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Zone/4138/shlyrics.htm

think about a rainbow, what it is.
every color acting as one - neat stuff!

neat poem too, thanks!...tom  

Daniel J D
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6 posted 2001-06-28 08:12 PM


Logan,
This is very well written, and close to my heart

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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7 posted 2001-06-28 09:35 PM


Still trying to find my warrior within, but this did give me a chill, also. You have much wisdom to share.
Sandra

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8 posted 2001-06-28 10:27 PM


I would like to be a warrior of the rainbow..this is magnificent.
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9 posted 2001-06-28 11:13 PM


Logan~
Most wise one ... you share beauty of The Prophecy with us all.

As it is told ~
When great chakra comes forth from the East ...
all colors of the rainbow unite as ONE in balance with Earth Mother~
We are the rainbow rays ... coming together in harmony ~

A lovely telling, my friend.
*smiles*
~*WillowWhiteFeather*~

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Parker
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10 posted 2001-06-28 11:18 PM


Loved the title, loved the story and poem. This is my first read of your work, I hope to find more of these treasures.  


Parker

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11 posted 2001-06-28 11:20 PM


Logan:  This is beautiful and prophetic. Maybe that time of the Rainbow Warriors is not so far off!

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2001-06-28 11:48 PM




Quite an enjoyable read.......carrying so much truth.
Well-done my friend ......

Thank you
*********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

ethome
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13 posted 2001-06-28 11:54 PM


                      "There will come a time when the Earth grows sick and
                          when it does a tribe will gather from all the cultures
                           of the World who believe in deed and not words.
                                    They will work to heal it.

                         They will be known as the "Warriors of the Rainbow."


                                ~An Ancient Cree Indian Proverb~

The earth is very sick right now Logan and we definitely need a tribe that will speak with deeds and not just empty words. We have the tribe of congress which is in all reality a very greedy but humanly weak tribe.

This is a splendid and proud poem of culture and intrigue!  Well done my friend!

Logan
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14 posted 2001-06-29 02:14 AM


Tom, thank you for the read and your comments. Appreciate you being here

Daniel J D, thank you for the kind words and for the read...gentle smile

Sandra, we always have to examine what is inside of us, to understand..Thank you for all the support you have given me..very gentle smile

Poet, you grace the room when you come in. I have the feel that you already are a Rainbow warrior. Thank you for your kind words...gentle smile

Ahhh, gentle Marge, most very tender smile for a guardian..I love the way you add to these sayings with great insight, which befits a keeper AND a Rainbow warrior..Thank you once again

Parker, thank you then for your first read of mine, and for your very kind comments...gentle smile

Trillium, hopefully, it is starting to come to past. All we can do is try..thank you for being here and for your comments...gentle smile

MEM, thank you for your kind read and comments. Appreciate your kindness...gentle smile

ethome..yes, it needs some backbone and less self serving in those hallowed halls..maybe....gentle smile, thank you for your comments and read

[This message has been edited by Logan (edited 06-29-2001).]

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15 posted 2001-06-29 03:33 AM


Well you have to know this was good for my soul after a hard day of pretending to be a 3 year old!  So much wisdom and forwarning in this piece, and your eloquent words truly made for an interestingly spiritual and necessary read Logan, thank you.  And Marge augmenting it with her little commentary always sheds even more light, so thanks to the keeper as well as the Guardian!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2001-06-29 06:01 AM


Very nice Logan...James
Paula Finn
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17 posted 2001-06-29 11:45 AM


we can all be rainbow warriorsall it takes is a willing heart and an open mind well done Logan

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 06-29-2001).]

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18 posted 2001-06-29 05:02 PM


Chills? *S* My hair started crawling before I finished reading the creed. *S* This is superb, Logan... I'm very glad your path brought you to us.
MARK V SHELDON
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19 posted 2001-06-29 06:07 PM


I think that each of us here at PIP Is, indeed, such a warrior at heart, mind, and spirit, for we all share a caring beyond just the self, and we have been "contributing to the cause" with our words, thoughts, and observations.  Now, when it comes to action, count me in!  Wonderful exposition, as usual, Logan.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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