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. . . Emotional waterfall . . .
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. . . Emotional waterfall . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Listen to my feelings As they flow Like a cascading Waterfall Over that rock Of stonehearted Insensitivity. Rising mist Of my essence Clouds the destination Amid the roar Of silent Indifference. Yet they continue to flow, Wearing away at That stone. They fall and pound Into the pond Of you And float downstream, Like flotsam, Creating a logjam That requires Your attention. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well... looks like your muse has served you well with this... nicely crafted with good image and flow of thought... hats off!!! Excellent... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Logjammed feelings....that's a new slant... Well done, Sir! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay--for just a minute I pretended that I wrote this one! It SO suits my life right now...Thanks for sharing it interloper--it's kind of like hearing someone speak in your own language after you've been in a foreign country for awhile.  My gratitude! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hmmm does this have anything to do with Vicky's poem, ah shucks here's a hug, and I luvs yeah, honest! Nicely done though, and mirrors feelings I too have felt unfortunately. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
masterfully woven! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I do like this ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
......but you already have my attention I liked this very much different from the norm......but that is not a bad thing |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your flowing thoughts very much. Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ I am indeed honored by your approbation. Heartfelt thanks. Lady ~ Yeah, once in a while I wax original Serenity ~ I'm happy and proud if this touched your heart in the smallest way. Thank you for stopping by to read. Mysteria ~ I'll take a hug any day Thanx.VAS ~ Whoa. Those are words generally reserved for Cpat Hair, Balladeer, et al. I am deeply honored. Marge ~ I'm glad SEA ~ then my life is complete I try to expand my creativity in short spurts surrounded by ages of romance Charisma ~ Thank you. And you do mean flowing like a river, right Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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