Gullible---with a challenge

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Open Poetry #14

Gullible---with a challenge

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-28 10:07 AM

The challenge---name the creatures discussed

Gullible
Virginia Salter

Gertrude and Heathcliffe
atop lamp-post perch
rapt attention
on guitar pickin’ Tony

Turn in tandem
ever on guard
gray and white forms
compliment soft clouds

One by one
each lifts off
flits, soars
dips
dives

disappears
into the distance
gone
barren pole
a stark reminder

© July 5, 2000
This was written at the same concert in the park as "Intrusion."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-28 10:11 AM

Well I would say sea gulls

nice images VAS

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-28 10:11 AM

Seagulls
Tiger
What'd I miss?
Don't you just hate empty lamp posts? I mean, then you don't have to make a wide path around them

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-28 10:13 AM

LOL...you do tend to give it away with the title....

cute!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-28 10:24 AM

heh heh heh, youse guys are too sharp. Last year the title DIDN'T give it away, can you believe it?! Savvy, you be, savvy you are, bet you go drivin' in a real savvy car.

love the wide path line!

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