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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-06-28 08:18 AM


Rewrite:

Dreams of Adult Children

In the quiet of the night
Plays the patterns of the day.
Bringing fantasies to light
In a phantom of display.

Romance blooms on every tide
Hero's come from out the blue.
Fear is lost and put aside
And our world reshapes anew.

Outlandish things bow, preform
Valley's greenest carpets lay
The impossible now norm
With knights and Queens on display.

Time has changed its aging score
Of the children we once were
Now we dream in adults store
Fantasies that we prefer.

So pour your dreams in measured gold
And all its magic will unfold.


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-28 08:32 AM


Enjoyed this Seymour...


Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-28 08:45 AM


Randy fed you well again last night...

Well done!

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-06-28 08:50 AM


"So pour your dreams in measured gold
And all its magic will unfold."

Wonderful sentiments Seymour, and a beautiful rhythm and flow. I so enjoy your work!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

RSWells
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4 posted 2001-06-28 08:55 AM


This dream world I'd seek be enrolled, a kinder place the truth be told.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-06-28 09:29 AM


Cpat Hair,
Just a little cotton candy. Thank you

Sunshine,
Yes Randy flies me there whenever I wish. *L*

Kit,
Just a spoon of sugar for the mornings coffee

RSWells,
You are enrolled, it's free.

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6 posted 2001-06-28 10:00 AM


Have you been looking in on my private dreams again, Sy?  I don't mind sharing, but, I mean ...  
Enjoyed the read my friend.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-06-28 10:15 AM


In the quiet of the night
Plays the patterns of the day.
Bringing fantasies to light
In a phantom of display.
============================

Time has changed its aging score
Of the children we once were
Now we dream in adults store
Fantasies that we prefer.

So pour your dreams in measured gold
And all its magic will unfold.
==========================


you dream in golden vision...and then you pen it so that we may too...
thank you for that Sy-babes.
me

~~~~~~~~~~
*for Randy...*winkiewinkie*


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-06-28 12:10 PM


Interloper,
Dreams are a commonality, I may have.

JM,
Randy cut out your picture and hung it on the wall. You are his favorite pin up. And mine too. Winkiewinkie Stinky

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2001-06-29 11:29 AM


This is exceptional work, my friend...

liked this immensely

regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-06-29 12:40 PM


Sudhir,
Thank you my friend.

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