navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Eyes
Open Poetry #14
Post A Reply Post New Topic Eyes Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-27 11:40 PM


Eyes

If I could tell the immensity
Of the stare, from deep within
If I could hold you with intensity
You'd understand my deepest pain

I look at your beautiful eyes
They tell me a million tales
I see the tears so pure, I tremble
My heart meets your stumble

Never before have I seen such beauty
As I climb the heights of my memory
I do recall there was only one such
I want not remember the depth of that touch
For the pain of that loss, I want no repeat
All I ask is that you understand my heartbeat

I'll keep looking into these eyes
For in them I see freedom, I see happiness
You are the most beautiful, the most truthful
I hold your hand in mine close to my heart
And hope that this dream never elapses


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

[This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 06-27-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2001-06-27 11:45 PM


DJD~ I love it when you do romance...sigh....

"All I ask is that you understand my heartbeat"

I love that......so beautiful  

JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-06-27 11:46 PM


Love for eternity...well written!
Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-06-28 12:41 PM


Very lovely indeed Daniel..enjoyed..

                 ~Victoria~

              ~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
4 posted 2001-06-28 12:52 PM


    Love is timeless, Great poem.
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2001-06-28 01:44 AM


Daniel...sigh....this is lovely
Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
6 posted 2001-06-28 06:01 PM


oh Daniel you always write the right words to touch my heart....love it.

Charisma

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Eyes

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary