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Shore to Shore
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Shore to Shore |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Shore to shore I lay upon the sands and leave an imprint of my soul to be washed away with the tide as the sun lays down upon the horizon in the dawning of a new day the sun pulling up from beyond the whitecaps lie upon the sands as my soul washes up on the shore. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is an excellent example of dark imagery.... well done! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful! I love the "sun lays down upon the horizon." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful images here! I don't think you've washed away poetically! I enjoyed the read very much! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice images and like the cyclic turn to the poem... enjoyed the read a great deal! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhispersCaress~ Such a lovely imagery of the ebb and flow of your thoughts. My, my ... so well done. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
closing my eyes. . . a wonderful picture. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely as always.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Haunting thought. Of course, we need your soul to remain landlocked so we can enjoy more of your work therefrom |
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