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Lisa
Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 88
Lunenburg,VT USA

0 posted 2001-06-27 08:38 PM

I’m overwhelmed by sadness
Tugging at my heart.
My eyes are full of unshed tears
I fear they soon will start.

To roll along my cheeks
Even though I’m not sure why?
I’m filled with such an emptiness
And fear I soon will cry.

It really makes no sense
The bleakness and the pain,
Perhaps it’s really nothing.
Or else, I’ve gone insane.

Lisa’ 98

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-06-27 08:47 PM

Lisa, maybe the after affects from the migraine? Hope you can get the pain put away. Hugs, ME

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-27 10:55 PM

Very excellent poem, and I took it of depression, as that is what causes what you wrote of.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

3 posted 2001-06-27 10:59 PM

Very strongly written poem of sadness. I bet you can write as effectively with happiness. Fine job. Roger

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-28 12:01 PM

sometimes these feelings just take hold, don't they

I wonder if maybe we're being called to prayer for someone rather than just finding a release of some unknown pressure...or maybe both, whatd'ya think?

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-06-28 12:05 PM

Well I don't think you're insane I just think you have a soft heart and have written a tribute to it!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-06-28 01:13 PM

well.. I would not say your words paint those of anyone insane... I have enjoyed your postings and so hope indeed to read more.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

7 posted 2001-06-29 12:21 PM

Insanity is accompinied by a cold heart my friend, something you obviously do not posses with all those feelings

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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