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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-06-27 04:32 PM


White Castle...

sliders!

mmmmmm!

they're good for the soul.

if you can eat them,
and survive the gastronomical ordeal
that's sure to follow,

without cursing some kind of god,

you've passed a spiritual test.

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they print "1-800-THECRAVE" on the boxes.

and at 4 am,
when your stomach is saying
"what the hell did you do to me?"
the words blur and look like "CALL 911"
...tom

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-27 04:41 PM


I hate it when that happens...

cute!

ethome
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2 posted 2001-06-27 04:46 PM


Heh heh good point!   enjoyable read!
Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-06-28 01:23 AM


Oh LOL....but still you go back again and again....theres just something about White Castle ....yummy
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4 posted 2001-06-28 02:19 AM


Oh darn - Canadian eh!  Don't know what White Castle sliders are, but sure thought your poem was cute!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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