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Communion ( rewrite) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Preface... while the images are sensual this is not intended to be sexual..it is intended to reflect the feeling of being one with all.. the mystical or spiritual thanks Communion And in the center circle Of this place I have found I embraced, my naked thoughts With bare breast against Bare chest Till the beating And breathing Were in one As I slowly Slip into them Rhythm beginning Drawing me, Rocking me, Gently Swaying to Music felt butnever heard as I Wrap Around me the edges… Of curved time and sleep in Knowing |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I like 'em both, rascal  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this VERY much....it does have a sensual feel to it, but I see it the other way too nicely done |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oooh, it's like being safe in Grandma's lap as she gently rocks in her rocking chair that would be a lovely way to feel even though one is in the know about all that is around, surely that is akin to what we'll feel on the other side |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
That which comes to your mind, and then through your sharing... is mystical, indeed.... a wonderful write, Captain.... please, never put the pen down.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh what I would have been to have be part of the "knowing", thank you for a moving, spiritual lifting. I agree, never put your pen down please. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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