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. . . unspoken feelings
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. . . unspoken feelings |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You, that supremely special sweet secretly, steamily, holding my neat, wishful heart. I affix but a thread afraid to untether. “Tis the pain I dread if I be bellwether. Yet I pray for us to accept the offering, one to the other, knowing our hearts’ coffering, of this our smother. Our unspoken feelings. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The receiver of this, is a very special person in your heart.... may she live on.... a lovely write... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Amen to that. Enjoyed |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow........couldn't possibly be more romantic....sigh...  this is beautiful |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oooooooooh, lovely rest in the silence together |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"You, that supremely special sweet secretly, steamily, holding my neat, wishful heart. I affix but a thread afraid to untether" Nicely written and turned... romantic and sensual without the obvious ( which is my department)... As always I enjoyed.... Light on heart shines from you I am illuminated |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love such unspoken feelings...warm touch of love found within. Charisma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
interloper, so sweet so beautiful. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Well written... What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmm...love the tension of that too...ouch. but a sweet and delectable ouch...  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely write, Interloper. She inspires your muse quite nicely. All writing comes |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Interloper, this is superb! A very lovely read... ~Tier |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ Amen. Sy ~ I will accept all amens. Thank you SEA ~ NO? then I have finally reached the pinnacle? OK, now I can quit VAS ~ Thank you, dear lady Ron ~ You are illuminated by a very deserved spotlight Charisma ~ I'm glad you understand. Thank you Brian ~ Thank you for the read. Don't remain a stranger. We Irish must stick together Jessica ~ Thank you Serenity ~ Yes, it hurts so good Lone Wolf ~ Ok, you can blame my Muse for this Tiers ~ Wow! Gee, thanx Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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