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Each Drop Of Rain.................
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Each Drop Of Rain................. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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with each drop of rain softly falling calling..... holding me in snuggle pose giving me gentle prose on this wet thoughtful day meandering thoughts find their way from heart and soul to tip of pen recalling, refalling moving on......again drifting on each drop of rain no sadness left to refrain only this sweet memory of when you were here in love with me ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful use of sound to convey the rain...and repeated through the poem..then..there is the content..nicely captured.. I enjoyed this a reat deal! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is a very soft, enjoyable, warming read....to snuggle...with raindrops.... the wend of your pen in rhyme, defined... delightful.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful ... and would you send some of that rain my way  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Good one, enjoyed. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- oh yes...i just love rainy days.. this is so tenderly written...i really enjoyed reading it. the rain looks good on you, my friend.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Only this sweet memory of when you were here in love with me." I love this feeling...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
nothing like the rain. . . and a warm blanket. . . loved this one SEA, such a quiet, honest quality about it. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Sounded like one of those perfect rainy days! ^_^ Nicely written. --Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Liking the pitter of your patter~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too, enjoyed the drip of your drop! I love the rain, and I loved this. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much....the rain brings me great joy  I'm glad you all liked this ~SEA |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Susan, Look what I found. This is so tender, so delicately beautiful that I had to bring it back up for more people to read and enjoy, as I have. And yes, here's your (((hug)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Michael here's yours (((HUGS))) |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
SEA, The rain can inspire so much in the memory of childhood days, and in the days of running hand in hand with someone you thought would share all the rainy days. They can be such a peaceful and new beginning to what may lie ahead. Such a lovely write... Elise |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
SEA really very beautiful.......... |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...The rain....ahhhh...also brings to me bittersweet memories... Very nice... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always brighten my day, may your love forever shower you with drizzles of rapture and true loves treasure! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SeaSweetie, this is a treasure and a keeper in my library... Hugs2uAlways... *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...*sigh* |
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