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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Yesterday Mind Walking alone where shadows keep sculpted am I, by words once said. Thoughts fade fast in the dim of night trying to sleep where my dreams once led. On day of days, beyond dark of blue when words of yours have reached an end from sunset to sunrise, resigning myself imprisoned before and now once again. My mirrored self has disappeared, never to touch or to see or to feel. Only deepened silence of regret in moments of loneliness, of what is real. There are no Romeos, no Juliets just shattered glass, a vision in blind. Walking the path of memories a windowless soul of yesterday mind. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very sad! But you know how I feel about your writing...and this is no exception...it's very well done! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"There are no Romeos, no Juliets just shattered glass, a vision in blind. Walking the path of memories a windowless soul of yesterday mind. " Tender and sorrowful Wynter ... beautiful phrasing throughout, just lovely.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You write so well, I just wish you'd find a litle cheer |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, It's time you left Wynter and found summer. *L* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very sad...but as always very nicely done.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...this is soft...and the flow is wonderful....but yes, very sad.... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What Sy says..... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Beyond sleep, where dreams keep, Memories and desires still living, When so deep, real can’t seep, Time suspends till the waking. Blue days reign within sunlight, Where mirrors reflect too much, It’s easy to long for the deep night, Where beauty replays without touch. Your poem is excellent, if a little sad. Gloom |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed the depth of sadness is well shown here Wynter. . . but, I feel that you will come out of it soon. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'Walking the path of memories a windowless soul of yesterday mind.' Peered out of a few of those in my time, sweet poetess. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, welcome to the fire, Wynter, gentle one, it is time to purge the hurts and live once again with happiness...gentle smile |
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