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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-06-27 02:54 AM

Listen to the stories told
in the whispers of your mind
seek ye find the secrets old--
seek and ye shall find.

Take the journey
take the step
cross the barrier
of Lethe
look past the past
forgive regret
a river's memory
begets
all the guilt
of "should have been"
stitch the quilt
of "could have been"
leaving now a patterned bliss
memories of what was missed.

Listen...shhhh...
I'll kiss your hand
in silent stare
of understand.
Fingers laced upon my lips...
electric sparks on fingertips.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-06-27 07:21 AM

I'll kiss your hand
in silent stare
of understand.
Fingers laced upon my lips...
electric sparks on fingertips.
......

***APPLAUSE***

regards O serene one,
Sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-06-27 07:24 AM

Take the journey
take the step
cross the barrier
of Lethe
look past the past
forgive regret
a river's memory
begets
all the guilt
of "should have been"
stitch the quilt
of "could have been"
leaving now a patterned bliss
memories of what was missed.

Listen...shhhh...
I'll kiss your hand
in silent stare
of understand.
Fingers laced upon my lips...
electric sparks on fingertips
===================================

me thinks me needs some vials from THAT River

or I'll just have what ever your having..
cuz this is divine...and that last verese?
got me a smilin and sighin *L*
beautiful Sen...muchly

me

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-27 07:25 AM

Celeste I've read this one before and I enjoyed it very much then as I do now..... It makes me take a trip into the river of oblivion.....wonderful trip! Keep up the good work sweetheart...you're doin great!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-06-27 07:35 AM

"all the guilt
of "should have been"
stitch the quilt
of "could have been"
leaving now a patterned bliss
memories of what was missed."

Oh Serenity, I just loved this! Such a wonderful flow throughout and superb phrasing, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2001-06-27 07:39 AM

Listen...shhhh...
I'll kiss your hand
in silent stare
of understand.
Fingers laced upon my lips...
electric sparks on fingertips.

Oh this is EXCELLENT me sista.
How do you DO it?
Love it!

Maree

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-27 10:19 PM

Absolutely superb writing, congratulations on an excellent piece of work!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2001-06-28 11:06 AM

serene sudhir--I am always delighted to see your name here--and my warmest regards back to you! Thank for reading!

JM--you sure you wanna brew your raspberry tea with this stuff?

Love ya lady--and? methinks I'm back for a little while anyway!

ah ethome! Big HUGS to YOU...you've got me just grinning over here...Thanks!

Kit? Thank you so much--I appreciate your reading as always--

My sista marie--hope to chat later! I think I've got a little time now!

Thanks lovie!

Mysteria--thank you for reading and it makes me happy to know I made you smile at least once! (butterfly "hauling ass" heh heh)True story...amused the hell out of me too!

Thanks to all, with me lovin' hugs, of course!

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

8 posted 2001-06-28 11:22 PM

kiss my finger tips like that, and there will be sparks flying from all kinds of places.

Love those electric lips.

Parker

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-06-29 12:07 PM

lovely serenity...truly enjoyed..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

10 posted 2001-06-29 12:08 PM

So much truth spoken in your words and put together in such a beautiful way! Wonderful

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

11 posted 2001-06-29 01:13 AM

Ahh, Serenity, yes, you are back with more power than ever before, very well done indeed...gentle smile

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-06-30 01:56 PM

And who could refuse such an invitation?
Well done indeed! Just an enjoyable read!

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