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Who are You? |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Who are you that comes in midnight sleep, are you from the future, I’ll eventually meet? Or are you from the distant past, stirring thoughts meant to last? Face indistinct and blurred to me yet instincts tell me I want to see. Are you the balm for a broken heart, or are you the remembrance of never part? Do you show that once before, love stood the test forevermore? Did you come to heal my soul, leaving love and tenderness as your goal? I think of this as I lay awake, knowing you came for my sake. It matters not what is to believe, whether of past lives or eternity. The only outcome I could see, it make the new day more peaceful for me. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, this is so like my dream of last week. I can feel the hope and love within. Beautiful, romantic, with just the smallest touch of melancholy. S |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh*  Just wonderful to see you writing here.  You get better and better. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan...dreams can be portents of things to come...but my favorite kind are made of skin and bones most hugable. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
ahh, Sandra, dreams become reality, and sometimes reality becomes dreams. Thank you for your kind words...gentle smile Ahh Temptress, most gentle one..I can only say, thank you for bringing me here..gentle smile Martie, I agree, flesh and blood hugs are the best. However dreams can be of the past also of many long agoes..Thank you for being here, we have missed you...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ This is one of the prettiest things I've read from you. 'I think of this as I lay awake, knowing you came for my sake. It matters not what is to believe, whether of past lives or eternity. The only outcome I could see, it make the new day more peaceful for me.' Oh, to make another's day more peaceful ... should be the achievement of us all. Lovely thoughts, my friend. Hmmmm ! See, dream catchers DO work !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Marge, did you ever have doubts that they DIDN'T work? very gentle smile. Thank you for being here, your face shines |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You touch our dreams, and then you share... well done, Sir.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan, Amen, enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Logan...I love dreams like this.....you have a soft touch to your words that feels sooooo nice I liked this very much, and I'm saving it! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And this made my day more peaceful and enjoyable. Thank you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- yep...this is definitely my favorite of yours so far... such beautiful thoughts you've penned here.. i really enjoyed this one. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sunshine, very gentle smile, your words are always a balm to my soul..Thank you, Sissie Seymour, Thank you for that, and for being here..gentle smile SEA, bless your heart, you are so nice to say such things...gentle smile Then Brother, you have just made MY day..gentle smile Ahh, Vicky, gentle smile, thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words and you being here. You touch me with your kindness |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I tried to copy my favorite part, I'd be repeating the entire poem. *S* This is beautiful, Logan. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Logan ... what a beautifully, tranquil and serene read, lovely indeed. I really enjoyed your thoughts in this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Suthern, gentle smile, you are way too kind, what a nice thing to say..Thank you for being here and for the read Ahh, Kit, your presence always lights the room, thank you for being here and for your so kind words..gentle smile |
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